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Sweet Wine |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The bubbly part, first spirited along the tongue Dribbling the chin and neck we laugh, these spirits sung Fruits and berries grace our plate Fed from fingers that have come to know, elate Familiar secret places, tenderly sought Bouquet that graces every swallow Held in savor flows the pallet and the kiss Given every this The long stemmed glass and table trimmed Preparations made and grinned Fondling of hands and plans Exciting, in my best imagination Thinking up the ways to sip upon This sweet libation Drink, as water from the spring Celebrate emotions on the wing The residual left, swirling into minds set free Lessening the frail and fright of empty night Echoes through the veins, my heart it claims Abundant in the ambiance and thrill of you upon my taste Not a drop to waste For cheer this dear is sweet wine crystal clear Copyright Kkh 7/22/02 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (07-22-2003 05:27 PM).] |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Magnificent! Love, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
I savored reading this slowly, as one would savor vintage wine... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful..I smiled as I read this and could almost taste each splendid drop. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Cheers Jason |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A vintage write...I savoured all of it.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great writing...I'm inspired! Eric |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - a glass of wine, a lovely woman, what else could one want of? BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Teach me... your writing is always a joy to read... always. Teach me. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThisDiamond~ Your word-wine has a heady bouquet~ Exhilaratingly delicious~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice,,,enjoyed..  |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
My tongue watered for something I've Never had. I will most likely never have it either. heh. Nice write. Jai |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Cheering loudly~ Here... is... to... you... Kathleen! |
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