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Open Poetry #27

Lace

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-22 04:45 PM

Lace

tangles linger
upon the shelf
underneath
I found myself
spun to
a deeper place
where one thread
led to lace

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

AnamCara
Junior Member

since 2003-06-25

Posts 41
Canada

1 posted 2003-07-22 05:01 PM

...beautifully written.

Love,
Angela

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2003-07-22 05:03 PM

-This was really neat. I liked how it was short and to the point. Good Write..

Also your sig quote is really cool too!

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2003-07-22 08:23 PM

damn..this is FANTASTIC

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