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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Unseen you jumped off the edge of conclusion in thinking you know me you don’t one tear fell into a frozen sea to become an iceberg in measure the real is left unseen "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Definitely a deeper write than it appears. Proving it is often what's under the surface that matters. Nicely done.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Well said, most of us are just below the surface. Jason |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I felt this deeply. Eric |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
You amaze me with your thoughts ... your brain must run one hundred miles an hour ... and then to capture those thoughts as you do ... awesome. This is simply a fabulous read. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Indeed.. always you make me feel.. and then I think.. and feel some more... that is neither good nor bad, the thinking.. it simply is.. absolutely fabulous, as usual.. must save it to read again  Pepper |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
the real is left unseen Helen, god, you always know just how to say it. some people never see a person in full, or the damage they cause them. brilliant as ever.xxxInstant karma's gonna get you. |
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