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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-07-22 10:28 AM



From Webshots

~~><~~
I am glad you are there
listening for my hearts call
Knowing you will ever be
to catch me if I should fall

You know how much I need
to feel your love so dear
Even when we are apart
we feel each other near

No matter what the distance
or between us be the space
Whenever our hearts call each other
before my eyes appears your face

Seeing your loving smile
as you tenderly look at me
Deep into your eyes
nothing but love I see

Or in a gentle breeze
when listening close we hear
A soft whisper of love
to each other we hear clear

Yes, I am glad you are there
listening for my hearts call
Knowing you will ever be
to catch me if I should fall
~~><~~




[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-22-2003 10:32 AM).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2003-07-22 10:36 AM


Ethel...
wow and then *sigh* this is really beautiful! I love the picture, it's one of my favorites and your words go perfectly with it....the flow here is perfect

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2 posted 2003-07-22 10:39 AM


Ethel, I do believe this has to be one of your best! Just beautiful and I am putting it into my library! hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

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3 posted 2003-07-22 10:40 AM


garysgirl
A lovely write, enjoyed.

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4 posted 2003-07-22 10:41 AM


This was like a soft whisper. I agree with SEA, it had a beautiful flow.

Even though you're not my lover, lol, you're always here to catch me when i fall.
so i guess, though i'm not in love, i can totally relate to your words, and why? because of you!

much love,
gem
xxxx

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5 posted 2003-07-22 10:50 AM


Sea, thank you so very much!!  
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Chris, into your library? Thank you!!  
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Seymour, thank you, kind Sir!!
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Gemma, LOL  You are a mess. Yep, I'll
be there for you when you fall! Thanks !!  :heart"
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I appreciate all of you so much!!  
Hugs to each of you  
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-07-22 11:10 AM



Ethel - this is just lovely!  Thank you.

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7 posted 2003-07-22 11:20 AM


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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8 posted 2003-07-22 11:56 AM


Ethel, this is a beautiful poem. As well as the picture. I am so glad you have someone to love and someone who loves you back.
PKreturns
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9 posted 2003-07-22 01:47 PM


"Knowing you will ever be..."

Great phrase here. Enjoyed reading this.

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10 posted 2003-07-22 03:02 PM


This one was especially lovely, dear Ethel Mae!

Loves 'n huggums,
Linda

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11 posted 2003-07-22 04:17 PM


Dear Ethel,
You have drawn a beautiful picture with your words alone...and the one you chose to accent your poem fits perfectly also.

I really enjoyed reading.

Thank you for sharing.

Love,
Angela

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12 posted 2003-07-22 05:00 PM


enjoyed
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13 posted 2003-07-22 07:53 PM


garysgirl - you romantic you, what a treasure of a write...

BC

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14 posted 2003-07-22 08:03 PM


Beautiful write Ethel...love the pic too!
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15 posted 2003-07-22 10:12 PM


Classically romantic ... *sigh*

Enjoyed.

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16 posted 2003-07-22 10:23 PM


Romantic,beautiful,soft, and snensous all rolled into one.You amaze me more each time.The picture fits well with your words.An awesome job and one for my library.
angelblueyes

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17 posted 2003-07-22 10:58 PM


Very nice and paints a pretty picture. Thanks for sharing
BB

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18 posted 2003-07-22 11:13 PM


Such a pretty picture of the treasure you hold. All Blessings, TD
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19 posted 2003-07-23 01:07 AM


very nice,,enjoyed..
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20 posted 2003-07-23 01:50 AM


Lady In White, thank you!  
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Bernie,  thanks!  
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Sue, thank you, sweet lady!  
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I appreciate all of you.  
Heart hugs to each of you,  

"If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room
in my mind & slam the door on it." Gary~  Heart hugs, Ethel

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21 posted 2003-07-23 01:52 AM


PK, thank you. Glad you enjoyed.  
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Linda, thank you, sweet lady!  
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Angela, thank you for your sweet words!  
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I really appreciate all of you.  
Heart hugs to each of you  
Ethel

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22 posted 2003-07-23 01:54 AM


Vandan, thanks!  
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Bill, thank you!  
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Tima, thank you, lady!  
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I appreciate ya'll very much.  
Heart hugs to all of you  
Ethel

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23 posted 2003-07-23 01:57 AM


Janette, thanks! I'm glad that you liked it.  
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angelblueeyes, thank you! That makes me feel good
to be put in your library! I love your name.
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Kathleen, thank you sweet lady!  
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Glenn, thanks!  
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I really apprecciate all of you.
Heart hugs to each of you  
Ethel

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24 posted 2003-07-24 09:44 AM


No matter what the distance
or between us be the space
Whenever our hearts call each other
before my eyes appears your face

This is just lovely... left me with a smile. *S*

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25 posted 2003-07-24 10:08 AM


Beautiful!
Eric

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26 posted 2003-07-24 10:30 AM


What a fantastic, and loving piece, Ethel, and your man is one lucky guy!!!  This has got to be my favorite of yours, although you make it hard to choose, as they are all heartfelt and beautiful.....I agree with BC...you are definitely a romantic, and thank goodness for that!!!  ~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

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27 posted 2003-07-24 10:42 AM


Yes, I am glad you are there
listening for my hearts call
Knowing you will ever be
to catch me if I should fall

    lovely its only love which can urge
    to write such deep a poem

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28 posted 2003-07-24 11:49 AM


nice to have that feeling, I bet. lovely write Ethel Mae
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