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Open Poetry #27

Surprised

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2003-07-21 01:00 PM

Surprised to find someone does care
To think that she is really wanted
Or that he could drop out of thin air

She is hesitant to grasp
What is already there
Cannot get over the fact
That life is not fair or unfair
Just moments like this together
To enjoy and be shared

In secret their pledge given voice
So fate will remain unaware
And ruin the fantasy inside the mind,
Reality would be more than they could bear

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-07-21 04:15 PM

"That life is not fair or unfair." Isn't that the truth. I enjoyed this piece. simple but with deep meaning. Thanks for sharing.
~Lex...