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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-07-21 11:55 AM

I have wasted open sky
closed it, casting war upon the only relief

Rocked the boat in shallow waves, no real danger
I have declined surrender

Harpooned sleep, relishes salt water
upon the crest I retch, my own fair bitter taste of cry

Anchor has drowned mystery wreck to fine sands
delicate sift of meanings as to why, I have wasted open sky.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-07-21 12:19 PM

Ok..I feel safe to repond to ya now. waiting for you to cool offa little..toasty the taosted..uhh muffin

ehh..whatever i could tell you it was good, but that'd be repedative

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-07-21 12:19 PM

Still alot of open sky left gem. Stop wasting start living.
Harpoons. boy do i know about them, everytime I go swimming i take one in the @ss
and remember roooooooound oooourrrrrr waaaay the birds sing for yuuuuuuuuh cause they already knooow yuuuuuuuuuuh

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-07-21 12:21 PM

should i harpoon him gem?

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-07-21 12:32 PM

Why?  hmmm . . . well we often waste open sky because inherently we love and I don't even look at it as wasting but learning and growing . . .

If I had another lifetime, I would cherish the sky every time it rose for me.  I would also ask that I come back emotionless

Got me thinking there gemma
xxoo

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

5 posted 2003-07-21 12:41 PM

turning back around
to
not take it for granted
this time

sweet!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2003-07-21 04:03 PM

As I look out ...

       ..... I see nothing but soul.

       Even an occassional rain is good for the heart.

              Its the floods you must be warned about.



                      Blue skies to ya sweet Gem!

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

7 posted 2003-07-21 04:18 PM

I loved the end. Very nicely wriiten.
~Lex..

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-07-21 04:25 PM

enjoyed

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