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Awake by Midnight (Duncan and Wind again)
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Awake by Midnight (Duncan and Wind again) |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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Every night, I'm awake by midnight trying to stop the world that's turned to plastic and looking at you, I wonder- is it too late? Bring me back by daybreak- To oppose the narrowing of eye willfully blind seems futile in light of betrayals now cast and looking at you, I wonder- was it all in vain? I won't take the blame- no one told you to change But you can still go back, take me with you... And looking at you, I wonder- is it too late for me? (we gave it another try..ok Duncan helped a lot  Hes..pretty good- for a porch puppy  ) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wind Never too late for the wind to blow. enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent for not only a porch puppy, but the wind that blew this in... "again". Yes, duet again, please! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful you two! You du-et so well... I do hope we will see another ...soon.  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
And looking at you, I wonder- is it too late for me? I love this echo throughout. Dunc seems to be a talented chap, i may have to go in search of his writes, as i've never really read him. the world has turned plastic, and so have some peoples brains..thanks for writing this you guys, specially dizzy miss lizzy (beatles song woooo yeah) it made me realise, it's too late for me to turn back now. love ya xxxxxx |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Liz ad Duncan, you dont need a weatherman to know which way the wind blows . . . (ok are we on a music kick here?) This line: Bring me back by daybreak- Ahhh . . . yes very nice guys xxoo |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lol-I added that line without his permission  , but this one was my topic. I haad fun- we talked about yellow doughnuts in between |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Seems you two do this well... and another would be a treat... so treat us to another...please? very nice work you two... very nice indeed. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lol Duncan- they think we have nothing better to do than do one of these every week . Oh wait? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bravo you two. A fine duet indeed. More please? hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Bring me back by daybreak- To oppose the narrowing of eye willfully blind seems futile in light of betrayals now cast and looking at you, I wonder- was it all in vain? I won't take the blame- no one told you to change But you can still go back, take me with you... And looking at you, I wonder- is it too late for me? ============================= would a moth seem greedy should she say du et again??  You two work well together...Great job of housebreaking the porch puppy Liz Cool lines of emote in this. Yes... the moth wants more "I'm good at two things and this is the other one." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
A sweetiepie and my best friend in duet, what is there left to wish for....than to ask them to write lots more... please. Beautiful, I really enjoyed. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Thanks everyone and thanks kiddo for writing with me again. I see you added a line.....hmmmm.  Ok, I approve (even if ya didn't ask me... ). One a week huh? Well, you keep throwing me great lines Liz and we'll keep writing 'em.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Very good duet, you two. I enjoyed reading.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lol Dunc- everyone thinks its part of yours anyway..so you get credit |
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