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anwaarhassan
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since 2003-07-09
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0 posted 2003-07-21 09:22 AM


The Rose


I recall the words of an old sage
Long since dead and gone,
“Son, life is a bed of roses…
Amidst a cluster of thorns.”

Pondering these words, I found
A message these words disclose
The thorns that mar the beauty
Are the guardians of the rose.

For often a careless hand
Will trifle with this gem
And find then only agony
From this jewel, stem.

But those who strive in earnest
And let perseverance prevail
Find the fruit is sweeter
Than that of labor frail.


And those who await time’s scythe
To strip the roses bare
Soon find the rose no longer
But fallen petals as their share.


© Copyright 2003 Anwaar N. Hassan - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-07-21 09:33 AM


anwaarhassan
I think I read that old sage. Enjoyed

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-07-21 09:34 AM


For often a careless hand
Will trifle with this gem
And find then only agony
From this jewel, stem.

~*~

What a lovely, lovely poem...


littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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3 posted 2003-07-21 11:49 AM


Well said Anwaar

The thorns that mar the beauty
Are the guardians of the rose.

beautiful . . .
I do love roses
xxoo

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-07-22 01:52 AM


As the sun goes down
Then rises again
And a new day is born as sworn
So a new rose flourishes on the new morn
Kissed by dew, and drenched in rays
it nurtures every eye that sees
Its beauty sings of Gods praise
As his beautiful Earth each day it adorns!
Its beauty taken in hand to cure a heart forlorn,
As a lover hands to another, and mends a heart that's torn!

I loved reading this, and thanks for inspiring me to write. I had lost the feeing I could write at all. :'(  But this beautiful write nourished me, too!

SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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