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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-07-21 08:29 AM



Collapsing

My senses tell me
That I may soon fade away
I'm glad I held you

"No matter what obsticles life may bring, remember, You can fly" author unknown

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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-07-21 10:56 AM


*tear* this is just a little sad, you know..
But glad that you held, once..just once.

Great write.

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2 posted 2003-07-21 11:06 AM


Small Delight .. like a piece of precious chocolate
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just out of reach
3 posted 2003-07-21 12:44 PM


Awww...sweet sadness. Lovely. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

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