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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-07-21 04:50 AM


Pure white rose,you know loves sweet whisper.
Please tell my love how much i love her.

Whisper on the wind of May,where skylarks do sing, tell her how deeply i have fallen forever.

Though bees and beautiful butterflies may splash inky colour into summers sweet scented garden, none can better thy lovliness.

Sunlit apple blossom,white and crisp.
Floating fields full of daffodils may fill mine eyes at once, my mind will be filled forever by your face.

Forest flowers of yellows and blues may carpet the ground, in sunlights dappled shade, my body screams one word with you,peace.

White rose so sweet, call to my love in deepest dreams, how precious she is to me,utter light words of love bewitching.

Divluge dearest rose,my full beating heart, my crying, weeping and desiring love,for her elegance, kindness and beauty enchanting.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (07-21-2003 04:53 AM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-21 04:53 AM


you paint a forest well, and I got lost in there, smelling the wonderful flowers and air and passions and listening to the birds...
Goldenrose
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2 posted 2003-07-21 04:55 AM


once again i do thank you Dixie for your kind words......

Goldenrose.

A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2003-07-23 05:50 AM


You know how to send me roses everyday, each poem is my white rose and more than a dozen I have....

Your poetry is becoming more beautiful with feeling and doing so with less words but still getting your point across...

I loved this so much!!!!!! WOW!

xxx Love Thy Veermilion Queen

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