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peppermint35
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0 posted 2003-07-21 03:57 AM


The kisses were sweet
But they weren't your lips
The arms that held me
Held me tight
All through the night
But it wasn't the same

Even though we danced
To a similar refrain
Held close together
We finished the measure
I still called out your name
And it wasn't the same

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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1 posted 2003-07-21 04:57 AM


try calling out someone else's name...works for me
Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-07-21 06:51 AM



Kahlil
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3 posted 2003-07-21 07:51 AM


the pain of trying to move on and still missing that certain someone.....
HopeS
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4 posted 2003-07-21 09:26 AM


Was this with someone and wishing it was someone else ? not being the same can cause such  heartache and pain

Hope

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-07-21 09:30 AM


peppermint35
I got into a lot of trouble doing that. LOL

peppermint35
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6 posted 2003-07-21 09:30 AM


Thanks to all for your kind words..

yes, Hope, it was with someone else and wishing it were ... sigh.. you understand.. moving on.. moving on.. moving on.. it's a hard thing to do, especially when one doesn't really want to..

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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7 posted 2003-07-21 09:32 AM


Pepper!  Welcome home!  

No, when it's not the one
you truly love,
it's never, ever the same.

vandana
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8 posted 2003-07-21 09:34 AM


enjoyed
PKreturns
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9 posted 2003-07-21 01:09 PM


I really like this one and the others of yours I have been reading...
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