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Skyfire
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0 posted 2003-07-21 03:19 AM


Come back
I miss you
I still need you.
I need your smiles,
and your kisses,
and the way I was
so nervous and so shy
the first time we went out.
I need that feeling
of being protected that I had
when you held my hand
on the way back to my place.
I need to feel safe in your arms.
I need to lay my head on your
shoulder, feel your arms around me,
and dance with you slowly
even if it IS a fast song.
I need to feel your
breath on my neck
and your lips on my forehead.
I need to see the love in your eyes
and know that I reciporicate.
I need the relief I felt
when I knew you were
"going to be okay"
I need what I felt when
you invited me to SunPeaks
to watch you do what you did best.
I need to dream
of you being in my life
for a very long time.
I just
need
    you
       back

© Copyright 2003 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-07-21 03:23 AM



And...you need to keep writing it.
Love and BIG HUGS, from Mum...

"it is better to be a part of beauty for one instant and then cease
to exist than to exist forever and never be a part of beauty"
-- Don Marquis

peppermint35
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2 posted 2003-07-21 03:26 AM


Sometimes the heart finds a way.. and the need can be answered

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Larry C
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3 posted 2003-07-21 04:35 AM


Courage dear girl. This was a wonderful write. Vicky's right don't stop.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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4 posted 2003-07-21 04:50 AM


it's hard to get over those times, I know personally...they do get easier though, I think...after years and years...

we're hopeless

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-07-21 05:58 AM


Nice expression of your feelings...James
gemjop
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6 posted 2003-07-22 01:19 PM


noooooooooooooooooo. stay strong.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-07-22 01:34 PM


Wonderfully emotive write--I really felt your pain.

Emotional growing pains are the absolute pits!

Loving & healing hugs,
EA

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8 posted 2003-07-22 02:44 PM


heart healing hugs to you, skyfire
cherish the memories

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9 posted 2003-07-22 05:24 PM


Great work.

Keep on Writing

Andy

ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2003-07-22 09:43 PM


The pain is clear, the journey long, and the solitude nourishing. Well done. TD
Janette
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11 posted 2003-07-22 09:49 PM


Ohhhhhh I know these feelings so well.
But the best way to get over a guy is to ... go shopping for another. *grins*

Skyfire
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12 posted 2003-07-23 12:44 PM


Aww thanks for the warm replies everyone   I was having an especially hard night on the 20th, and that was two months after Will died, and, listening to Vicky once again *grin*, I wrote, and this is what came out. I didn't get all of it out, but I've gotten enough out so that I can heal a bit more before the next time that I miss him so much. Thanks again!!

... Even though you're gone ...

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