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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2003-07-20 08:05 PM





could I, should I...
tell you that I love
the way you walk
the way you talk
the way your eyes
are shining bright
the way you smile
the way you dial
with grins of hope
arms open wide
the way you lead
the way you plead
the way you tell me
that you love
every word I've written
in these lines above

I think I love you all


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (07-20-2003 08:06 PM).]

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Wind
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1 posted 2003-07-20 08:07 PM


hey sweetie I think you just did
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-07-20 08:14 PM


Titia, this is a really sweet poem.
And, you know what? I think we all love you right back.  
Hugs  
Ethel

vlraynes
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3 posted 2003-07-20 08:19 PM



Yep...you just did..and you did it beautifully!
And guess what!  We love you too!

"it is better to be a part of beauty for one instant and then cease
to exist than to exist forever and never be a part of beauty"
-- Don Marquis

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4 posted 2003-07-20 08:47 PM


Yeah, but ya love me most huh????  
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5 posted 2003-07-20 09:21 PM


tell Duncan yes and let's keep it our little secret tht it's ME!!
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6 posted 2003-07-20 09:26 PM


both of you know...she loves ME the best.
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7 posted 2003-07-21 09:57 AM


Titia~
You're such a cutie ... get your booty back to Florida !!!
Love this little piece of your heart bestest friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Titia Geertman
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8 posted 2003-07-21 08:48 PM


Wind, thanks dear lady

Garysgirl, I did receive those hugs ya know

Vicky, one day I'll hug you personally sweet friend

Duncan, you know that don't you

Balladeer, I told Duncan yes, does that mean we have a secret? LOL

Wind, you got that right, but don't tell those guys ssssst

Marge dear friend, if I could fly tonight I would hug you tomorrow but I need to win the lottery first in order to do that.
Hugging you in mind sweet girl.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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