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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-07-20 05:18 PM




River is wide
she knows my day
the silver and the gold

Shallow in hope
will you risk for me
the greener side of fate

Reflection if fair
proposes same
enlightened in the dark.


© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2003-07-20 05:33 PM


"Reflection if fair
proposes same
enlightened in the dark."

Great verse!  Nice to meet ya...

Wind
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2 posted 2003-07-20 05:50 PM


wow. you are just the most awsome person ever my library is full of Gem stuff. oh well, another wont hurt
Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-07-20 06:07 PM


The river isn't the only thing that's wide. I gotta put down the chocolate my @ss is getting there..grins Laugh...damn..you...(Shatner imitation) great write drop
Wind
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4 posted 2003-07-20 06:08 PM


Raph- don't the mods ever warn you for talking like a guttermouth?
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
5 posted 2003-07-20 06:14 PM


Oh c'mon its such a simple word..yeesh
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-07-20 06:14 PM


May your river always be wide, deep, and reflect the light, dear Fair One!

Huggums,
EA

Wind
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7 posted 2003-07-20 06:15 PM


yeah..so is love.

Watch this Gem :

I love you Raphy

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-07-20 06:59 PM


Good job girls - hit him where it hurts and I am a mod mwuahhhhhhhhhhhh

Sorry Gem

Tears fall freely
from this torn and tangled face
I have died today
My own grave I dig
The dirt
in my fingernails
I stare at
and wonder . . .

How I am going to get them clean again?

God gemma - I cant stop doing this in your posts . . . you inspire me
xxoo

Wind
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9 posted 2003-07-20 07:01 PM


I'm guilty of it too- don't wory, she loves having people write for her. It makes her happy
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
10 posted 2003-07-20 09:45 PM


This one has a wonderful flow.
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