The Only Good Reason is the One You Gave Me

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Open Poetry #27

The Only Good Reason is the One You Gave Me

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-20 12:52 PM

Excuses,
she crossed oceans.
There's nothing
quite like
That kiss
goodbye.

Eyes dismal,
walking into
why and maybe.

Spawn is,
because.

Skimming her hand
above the salt.

Excuses,
there is no better reason.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-07-20 01:09 PM

Wow...!!
Eric

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2003-07-20 01:22 PM

very powerful

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

3 posted 2003-07-20 01:56 PM

spawn is
because

tough enough

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2003-07-20 02:41 PM

Very well done...

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

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5 posted 2003-07-20 02:42 PM

ello Meg, I really loved this one.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-07-20 04:10 PM

Amazing!! Love this.
Hugs.

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

7 posted 2003-07-20 04:38 PM

succinct
powerful
well spawned

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-07-20 05:28 PM

"The only good reason is the one you gave me."
Reminded me of a situation where a woman kept giving me some good reasons why we shouldn't be together, and she finally convinced me, yet she still wanted to be together...James

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-07-20 06:04 PM

You have great judgment for line breaks and pauses. Always gives your writing that edge.
Great use of imagery too. keep them coming need a little more grit in open

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

10 posted 2003-07-20 06:27 PM

At times it is easier to accept a reason, than not to be given any reason at all...

Lovin' hugs,
EA

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