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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Neglected Tending to a Neglected garden I see it has taken a life of its own A tangled mess of weeds Plants and grasses of unwanted needs I see it requires much attention And wonder if my touch and affection Will bring back its desire to live "No matter what obsticles life may bring, remember, You can fly" author unknown [This message has been edited by Amature2 (07-20-2003 11:00 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Amature, of course it will I think you just described my soul up there xxoo |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I see it requires much attention And wonder if my touch and affection Will bring back its desire to live Amature, anything does better with touch and affection.  "If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
touch does wonders |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This speaks of me recently.I've realized with just a simple touch you can do wondrous things. I'm puuting this one in my library when I have down times to remind me all I need is a touch.Excellent job. angelblueyes |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
If it's neglected it is hungry for touch. :'( SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
this gives pause.. so much in this now you got me thinking on my own garden... nice poem |
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