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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I want this spicy to my tongue-- the crack of claw yearns crabbiness take this pilfering, regret-- and toss a bit of beer to left toe the liquid circling and feel the moat of sand and feet so insipid-- so hard knee'd-- take ye, ME-- the pilfering. A little lift of land is sky mountains are just clouds of point drifting pillow willow's wind against the great skyscape. I am gremlin on the wing. I am flight of "want-some-more" I am the drift of down of feet. I am the tale survivors swore that never could be there--much more than living through this crash of flame. I am the one who walks away, never once do I look back. I cross the meat upon the track-- I watch the wheels make mince. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God Karen . . . you know what - ok this is going to be a long one . . . I read "Buried Alive" awesome biography of Joplin and in it one of her college roomies said that when the world recognized her . . . she was blowing their minds at half volume . . . Can you imagine that? We never got to hear her full throttle! Well, I see you in the same light . . . and to see the whole of you would truly be too much beauty for the mortal being to bear. You are amazing . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (07-20-2003 04:54 AM).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
they're in front of us they're behind us they're to the left of us to the right of us no way in hell are they gonna get away from us this time.... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"I am the one who walks away, never once do I look back." Well, of course. *smile* |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
the place is familiar the blood valley echoes little grousling fly |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
I really don't know which part is my favorite, so I pick the whole. Wonderful read.  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karen...I've been back to this one so many times now. I keep reading and re-reading and fooling myself into thinking that I'll actually come up with something profound to say about it . Well...it ain't gonna happen, so I'll just do the best I can with what I've got. This is an awesome write, as are all of yours, but there was just something about this one that grabbed me. I can't explain what it was, but it just ate at me... made me keep coming back and kept me trying to gain a deeper understanding of it. I'm rambling now, so I'll shut up, but... bottom line?...I felt this one...and I love it. You are amazing. Love you, lady.  "it is better to be a part of beauty for one instant and then cease |
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