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bitter canyon
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bitter canyon |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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self-hatred is the ass I ride through this tumbledown scree canyon walls above me I scan looking for signs of habitation caves of those who tired of riding this slow bowbacked beast of burden and scrabbled up the rock like a prisoner hunting freedom |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
strong footholds Bri . . . (like I am one to talk) When you get there . . . please describe the view for me? xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
all roads are lonely eventually |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i'll never beeeee your beast of burden. made me sing the stones..now i love ya even more. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I felt this one, Brian. Well done, my friend.  "it is better to be a part of beauty for one instant and then cease |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ah geez, loose rock and a winding cliffpassage. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hope you've got your hardhat on and your rapelling gear is in good condition  cool write |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
"self-hatred is the ass" nuff said. Great write!  |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
We keep struggling on, sometimes I think because somebody, somewhere, sometime, told us it was a good idea to do that, lol. Good write, enjoyed!!! Pepper |
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