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Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

0 posted 2003-07-19 10:47 PM

all sunshine makes
a desert
dance for rain

dance for rain
eradicating rain
sin washing rain

dance to the oasis for
rain

but forestall
the river
Eros
and its
anacondas

make that ford
cesarean

dare sire
a friend
nomad

a friend in the jungle
to come

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2003-07-19 10:49 PM

I really like your writing style

I could read you every day and learn something new

Bravo Bello and easy on th eyes too!! Roniece Dawson-Bruce

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-07-19 10:53 PM

I enjoyed this very much. I will learn alot from you I'm sure. thanks.
angelblueyes

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-07-19 10:58 PM

all sunshine makes
a desert
dance for rain

dance for rain
eradicating rain
sin washing rain

dance to the oasis for
rain

Reb, every time I read your poetry now,
I think of a Southern evangelical preacher saying the words as I'm reading. LOL
It is always very interesting.

"If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room
in my mind & slam the door on it." Gary~ Heart hugs, Ethel

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-07-19 11:07 PM

I have to admit that this was a bit of a mental work out for my linear brain--but I needed the exercise!

Warm hugs,
EA

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2003-07-20 12:04 PM

Wow.. just wow.

Amazing work.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2003-07-20 12:33 PM

"all sunshine makes
a desert
dance for rain

dance for rain
eradicating rain
sin washing rain

dance to the oasis for
rain"

Well, you've gotta know that I just love this...rain
being one of my favorite things and all.
This is a very cool write, my friend. I enjoyed.
Hugs,
~Vicky

it is better to be a part of beauty
for one instant and then cease to
exist than to exist forever
and never be a part of beauty
-- Don Marquis

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-07-20 12:37 PM

"a friend in the jungle
to come"

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-07-20 01:49 AM

LR - dance for rain
I understand
thank you
xxoo

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2003-07-20 10:09 AM

loved the way you moved the imagery from rain to desert to procreation and jungle,
leaving the reader to imagine everything in between

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (07-20-2003 10:10 AM).]

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2003-07-20 08:18 PM

Rebel

Your are such a deep and thinking poet...I like that alot!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2003-07-20 09:43 PM

dance to the oasis for
rain

but forestall
the river
Eros

This was timeless, creative and imaginitive...
and that picture!!! I know I know, it's not polite to stare.

The firmest friendships are formed with mutual adversity, like steal unites with the fiercest flame. (author unknown to me)

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