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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2003-07-19 08:06 PM




I exist in you
your heart holds immensity
in your light I dance

© Copyright 2003 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-07-19 08:37 PM


Your light +  his light = a super nova!

Breath-taking!

Lovin' hugs,
Linda

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-07-19 08:59 PM


BRAVO! nice presentation and thoughts
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2003-07-19 09:04 PM


Margherita - and I'm sure the darkness glows with the light of romance...

BC

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
4 posted 2003-07-19 09:23 PM


Beautiful Margherita
A wonderful job . . . it is hard for me to write these especially with so much emotion
xxoo

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-07-19 09:34 PM


Margherita, this is so beautiful.
Your picture just set off your
beautiful words. I enjoyed it very much.
Hugs  
Ethel

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2003-07-19 10:35 PM


Excellent! TD
angelblueyes
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Oklahoma
7 posted 2003-07-19 10:41 PM


This is amazing.Your light truly shines.
angelblueyes

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2003-07-19 11:31 PM



Shucks.  Earth Angel took my reply!
Back into the stratosphere with you!

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2003-07-20 12:42 PM


very cool

~shadows dance by the light within~



JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-07-20 05:34 AM


Beautiful...James
inkedgoddess
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Ohio
11 posted 2003-07-20 09:45 AM


beutiful poetry
scorpio
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right...there
12 posted 2003-07-20 10:46 AM


Wondefully expressed..

believe in what your heart feels...

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
13 posted 2003-07-20 10:54 AM


beautiful simply, simply beautiful..abbraci
Raffaele

Margherita
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Eternity
14 posted 2003-07-20 02:20 PM


Thank you all my friends. ... I'm sorry I have not much time these days to stay on PIp as long as I'd like, but my love is with you, dear Poets.
Hugs. Margherita

Etain
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since 2003-02-22
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The moon...
15 posted 2003-07-20 06:28 PM


A big smile.
In few, so much.
Etain.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
16 posted 2003-07-20 06:33 PM




...*FANTASTIC!!*...

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Ericc
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17 posted 2003-07-20 06:45 PM


Beautiful Margherita.
Love,
Eric

Nightshade
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just out of reach
18 posted 2003-07-20 07:02 PM


Oh, I love this! Just beautiful. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
19 posted 2003-07-20 10:52 PM


Wonderful senryu Margherita...don't you just love these?


Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
20 posted 2003-07-20 11:48 PM


Love the presentation!

Beautiful work.

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