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Cassandra Ness
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0 posted 2003-07-19 07:31 PM




Sunshine
Through day and out
Twinkling like a giant star
In the morning sky



Photography by Nancy Ness



© Copyright 2003 Cassandra Ness - All Rights Reserved
Wind
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1 posted 2003-07-19 07:34 PM


Hey, welcome! I'm in cape cod too, right now. Isn't that weird? You'll like it here, great first post
vlraynes
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2 posted 2003-07-19 07:40 PM



Cassandra!  Hi there, sweet girl!
I'm so glad you decided to start sharing your poems with us!

I really love this one.  You did a wonderful job on it.
I can't wait to see what else you can write.

Welcome to Passions!



Hugs,
~Vicky


it is better to be a part of beauty
for one instant and then cease to
exist than to exist forever
and never be a part of beauty
-- Don Marquis

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3 posted 2003-07-19 07:41 PM



Oh My!!  How lovely is this?!  
And, your information says you are only 8!
You are already a wonderful writer...
Much like our very own Nancy Ness  
I'm so happy to see you here Cassandra..
I look forward to seeing more of your writing.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~


~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (07-19-2003 07:42 PM).]

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4 posted 2003-07-19 07:42 PM


wow? only 8? She's even got me beat!
Poet deVine
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5 posted 2003-07-19 07:46 PM


Welcome to PiP!! I realy liked your poem. It shows you have a lot of talent. I hope you keep writing and show us more of your work.

Cassandra, please check your email for a special welcome.

Margherita
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6 posted 2003-07-19 08:13 PM


Welcome dear Cassandra!
I love your first post very much, full of warmth and brightness.
Much love, Margherita

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7 posted 2003-07-19 08:29 PM





Great first post!!
Have fun here !!

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8 posted 2003-07-19 08:53 PM



WELCOME!
I see the power of the pen runs in the family. Great beginning, Cassandra!

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-07-19 08:53 PM


Cassandra, you just brightened my day with your beautiful words and your Mom's breath-taking photograph! A delightful first post, Dear One!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

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10 posted 2003-07-19 09:15 PM


Cassandra,
This is so pretty. I love sunrises and sunsets
and it really sets off your poem.
I love the smilie sun, too. I am
really going to enjoy reading your
poems, little lady...and you are only 8?
Oh, and here's a big welcome to
Passions In Poetry

Heart hugs

Ethel...garysgirl

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-19-2003 10:48 PM).]

Nan
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11 posted 2003-07-19 09:35 PM


Hey Cute Blonde Kid #4... You're a pretty darned good little poet.  I hope that these nice people click on your homepage link to see your other poems and a nice picture of you.  

I won't tell Mom you're staying awake at night writing poems if you don't...

I love your guts and your big toe too...

Nani...

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
12 posted 2003-07-19 09:48 PM


Cassandra Ness - and I've seen this morning sky, and it's most beautiful...

BC

angelblueyes
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13 posted 2003-07-19 10:44 PM


You did excellent here.Made me smile.Such a great mind at a young age.Kepp it up.Look forward to reading more.
angelblueyes

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14 posted 2003-07-19 11:25 PM



Welcome to Passions, Cassandra!  I know your Grandmother is your Sunny One...but do you mind if I adopt you?  

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

littlewing
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15 posted 2003-07-20 01:11 AM


Welcome to PIP . . .
nice entrance
this is beauitful!
xxoo

Honeybee
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16 posted 2003-07-20 11:55 AM


Hi Cassandra ~ Welcome to Passions!

This is lovely post with the sentiment and picture both complimenting each other.

And you know what? You're lucky to have such a wonderful Grandma....and she's a pretty darned good poet too!  (like you)

Melissa

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

NewEnglandlazurlu
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17 posted 2003-07-20 04:52 PM


Hi Cassandra, Welcome!

I loved your poem and think you did an awesome job of writing.

I hope one day to get to meet you ...
hugs, Marti

ThisDiamond
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18 posted 2003-07-20 07:58 PM


Welcome to PIP.

Very much enjoyed your first post.
See you soon. ThisDiamond

Kit McCallum
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19 posted 2003-07-20 09:26 PM




Cassandra!  It's wonderful to see you here!

What a wonderfully sunshiney first post,
and I love the picture!

Welcome, welcome!  I sure hope you'll post more for us!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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20 posted 2003-07-20 09:48 PM


Hey Cassandra  
It's me again. I looked at your Homepage. It's really pretty, just like you are. Hey, do you like smilies? I do. Aren't they cute? Look at this dancing tiger. Have you seen him?

                    

Oh, and here's tweety bird....

                      

I'm really looking forward to reading more of your poems.  
Well,, I'll talk to you later.
Heart hugs,
Ethel....garysgirl

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21 posted 2003-07-20 10:05 PM


Hi Cassandra! Welcome to Passions! I loved your sunshine poem--hope to see more from you soon!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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22 posted 2003-07-20 10:11 PM


Hey Cassandra...wonderful, uplifting, spirit-filled poem!

Oh yeah...WELCOME TO PASSIONS!


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23 posted 2003-07-21 12:01 PM


Hi there Cassandra, my little Snow White with blonde hair     What a wonderful first poem to post at Passions and what a sunrise!  I wonder where your Gramma saw that one   could be Provincetown.  Now that was a perfect first posting and I hope when you visit her you will post more.

    

Big hugs from Sharon to you and Autumn too.


[This message has been edited by Mysteria (07-21-2003 12:03 AM).]

Elizabeth Santos
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24 posted 2003-07-21 12:16 PM


A giant star, indeed
HOw lovely is your poem, Cassandra
Please keep writing
HUgs from Pa
Elizabeth

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25 posted 2003-07-21 01:07 AM


Thank you for reminding why I enjoy the sun so much.

Welcome to Passions, I look forward to reading more of your work.

vlraynes
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26 posted 2003-07-22 09:50 PM



Just because I really like your poem
and I really REALLY like YOU.

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-22-2003 09:50 PM).]

Dark Angel
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27 posted 2003-07-23 02:49 AM


Hi Cassandra, welcome to Passions. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem with us.

I'll be looking out for more

Maree

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28 posted 2003-07-23 07:35 AM


hi im new too and i really like your poem

Daniel

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29 posted 2003-07-23 02:19 PM


And you're only 8? I'm impressed! Yes I am!


Nan
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30 posted 2003-07-30 10:18 PM


Cassandra wants to thank everyone for reading her poem...
Cassandra Ness
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31 posted 2003-07-30 10:34 PM


I thought of this poem because I needed a present for a bridal shower gift.

Thank you for reading it.

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32 posted 2003-07-31 02:41 AM


oh my...this is art, just gorgeous!
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33 posted 2003-07-31 02:48 AM


That is so sweet, Cassandra, that you
thought of this poem because you needed a
wedding shower gift. I'll bet the bride loved
your gift.  
Hugs to you, little lady  
Ethel

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34 posted 2003-07-31 03:31 PM


Cassandra~
I really enjoyed your poem and my vist to your web page.
Neat picture !!!

Keep writing gal ... it looks good on you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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