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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2003-07-19 04:18 PM




An angel cries a tear
Which drops to mother earth
A heavenly shooting star
Appears from out of nowhere.

Flowing through the clouds of gold
The tear travels on
A lonely child sits crying
Hurt and all alone

The tear joins her tears
Travelling up the stream
Flowing to her heart within
Setting happiness free.

She stands on grassy plains
Spreading imaginary angel wings
Running around in circles
Arms held out to sides
Smiling now not crying
What a beautiful sight.



© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-07-19 04:41 PM


I especially enjoy reading your gentle, creative, and loving writes such as this. This poem was tender--and heavenly!

Lovin' hugs,
EA

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2003-07-19 08:31 PM


Lee, this is a jewel of tenderness and light.
Love, Margherita

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
3 posted 2003-07-19 11:48 PM


This showed all the beuaty and kight from the angels abovve.I look forward to reading more from you.
angelblueyes

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-07-20 05:32 AM


enjoyed...James
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