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comp_xp
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0 posted 2003-07-19 03:11 PM


When U're Not Around

As the sun rises
spreading it's warmth aceoss,
I am raised by your love.
Grasses which have droplets of dew,
or mist or snow,
My eyes are in tears
When I know you are not here -,
Anymore.
Birds calling from thr trees,
trying to wake people
who are in deep sleep,
I here your speech,
whenever I go back to
the graves of sorrow.
Empty benches in the park
call me to sit,
to get lost in the days
which will never come back.
Winds that blow,
touch my heart and go,
I whisper in them to tell you,
that you are the one,
I miss the most.
Rains give me the pain
of not seeing you again.
Night when falls, as the
cool breeze brings calmness
to all -,
You come in my dreams
to whisper in my ears,
rub my tears,
hold my hand
and say,
"no odds or fears
can take you away from me -,
My dear "....






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Gaia
1 posted 2003-07-19 03:30 PM


Poignant write. It sounds as if you are really missing this soulmate.
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2 posted 2003-07-19 09:23 PM


You come in my dreams
to whisper in my ears,
rub my tears,
hold my hand
and say,
"no odds or fears
can take you away from me -,
My dear "....


Even though this is sad, it's a well-written
poem. I enjoyed reading.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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