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Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-07-21 11:16 PM


I saw her whisper
a secret, that none could hear
thinks she's so sneaky

She's always been that
"sneaky", I mean, who trust her?
maybe her father

But it was probably
her father, that made her game
for pawn scum like me

and so now I move
my castle, and claim victory
Please learn to play chess

My love


[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (07-22-2003 05:29 PM).]

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2003-07-21 11:18 PM


Very cute...
love games are fun...aren't they?
TD

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-07-22 01:39 AM


When I was a kid I remember playing hearts in the sun,  can't remember where I was though, I loved that game!!!  It was one of those nice and long vacations, in baja, maybe,  too much tequilla, maybe.

Chess is another fascinating game I haven't played for a long long time, the implications make for every move you make, and good poetry at that!

Nice poem Jason~


brian sites
Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
3 posted 2003-07-22 01:52 AM


damn this is cool Jason

senryu
castle

with a nodding head
all the way through

wished I thought of this

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