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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-07-19 04:29 AM


She comes across the grassy fields, a vision, slowly, steadily, seductively.
My heart quickens at her sight.

White rose in her hair wild and free, flowered dress of vivid colours, her heart full of love, her air of kindness and light.

Wind tousled hair, she brushes from her cheek.
Waving she catches sight of me from afar.

Enfold me, hold me, control me, i love thee, more than my own life, more than the life of a star.

Embrace me to you, come be my life, my everything, i am nothing without you.

When we are old and grey this love affair will continue, for a year, a decade, a whole life through.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (07-19-2003 04:43 AM).]

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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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1 posted 2003-07-19 04:33 AM


Absolutely beautiful and romantic.I hope this is the love you have for someone.May it continue forever.
angelblueyes

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-07-19 04:34 AM


I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!

Your poem is the music to my heart! the wind in my hair, the passion in my kiss,
the wind beneath my wings!

This is what I love you for!!!!!!! Your heart is so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


xxxx love A Romantic Heart

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-19-2003 04:35 AM).]

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