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angelblueyes
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0 posted 2003-07-19 03:15 AM



In life there's choices we make.
Sometimes the happiness we partake.
The dreams that we've kept inside.
The fulfilling desire that we seem to hide.
A dream so precious and sweet.
A forbidden rapture that seems to large a feat.
From such a young age, it is within.
It tries to surface again and again.
Our anxiety and all of our fears.
Begin to take toll over the years.
And then in a moment's glimpse.
As if all time has been missed.
It shines so tender and bright.
The dream abounding that glorious light.
Dabbling our feet one step at a time.
For once letting go of what was behind.
Conquering and tasting that dynamic dream.
Knowing now that nothing was as hard as it seemed.

angelblueyes

© Copyright 2003 Crystal - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-07-19 03:47 AM


Welcome to Passions. This is a very beautiful first post. I really enjoyed reading it and hope to read much more of your poetry. Please check your e-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions.
Ethel...garysgirl
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angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-07-19 04:19 AM


Ethel,
Thank you so much for the response and the card.You've made me feel very welcome which is rare.May your days be enlightened by all that you find.Thanks.
angelblueyes

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3 posted 2003-07-19 06:56 AM


Welcome to passions your poem was a grand entrance! enjoyed it!

~ARH

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4 posted 2003-07-19 08:20 AM


I can see you're going to be a wonderful member - Welcome to Passions!  You've posted over 20 responses before treating us with your first poem!  I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-07-19 08:23 AM


angelblueyes
Well done, enjoyed.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-07-19 08:27 AM


Enjoyed your words...James
Ericc
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7 posted 2003-07-19 10:19 AM


What a great entrance here!
Eric

Kahlil
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8 posted 2003-07-19 10:31 AM


Live and learn and follow your dreams.  Welcome to Passions!
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9 posted 2003-07-19 03:21 PM


Welcome Crystal! words of wisdom...that's what you've just written.
Hope you enjoy the variety of writings here at Passions, and I look forward to reading more from your pen.

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10 posted 2003-07-19 03:25 PM


Welcome to Passions.  I look forward to more of your work

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2003-07-19 05:04 PM


angelblueyes - a first post well done. Many truths you write with your pen...

BC

Wind
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12 posted 2003-07-19 05:06 PM


you seem like a good person to have here. I'm very glad to read your fist post. Keep reading, and writing. And WELCOME

Don't it allways seem to go,
that you don't know what you've got till' it's gone
-counting crows

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13 posted 2003-07-19 05:33 PM





Enjoyed your first post!!

angelblueyes
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14 posted 2003-07-19 10:11 PM


I would like to say thank you so much to ARH, Karilea,Seymour,James,Eric,Kahlil, Midnitesun,Interloper,Bc,Wind,and Nightshade for all responding to my post.You've all made me feel very welcome and this seems a very warm place. Thanks again.
angelblueyes

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