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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Forgiven I saw myself in light Independence loomed up in the night On hold for many years Deeply hidden in emptiness fears A longing choked my heart Clogged the bottleneck, craved the spark Awaiting the unknown Standing scared and oh so alone Like a memory or a forgotten dream Returning once more to torture me And then receding again just like the sea Revealing its sobering reality Perhaps I didn’t believe That strange and new were possible for me And then I tested my will With senses of speeding while standing still Like a memory or a forgotten dream The queen of hearts played a trick on me She returned again just like the sea I relive the sobering reality I was lost And I was loved I was lost And forgiven, forgiven |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Like the proverbial penny that keeps turning up! It is sometimes easier to forgive than forget. Warm hugs, EA |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thank you for your understanding, you Angel, you.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Kahill - I liked this write - I could relate to it very well....thanks for sharing sometimes we learn forgetting what we learn... Take care, Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write, I can relate well |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I can realatee all to well to this.Firgiving is the easy part forgetting takes moretime if not an eternity. You did great on this. angelblueyes |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thanks so much, to all of you. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Very thoughtful write. Enjoyed very much. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautifully expressed. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kahlil: what an arduous journey indeed You are a strong soul and will come out on top Beautiful writing xxoo |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
MM, Kethry, littlewing, thank you for your comments. I may have botched a few things, but I at least found personal forgiveness, if nothing else. ~K~ |
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