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Open Poetry #27

Heh (for vicky)

serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-07-19 12:01 PM

Legend speaks of legends made
stating that creation laughed
that the tides retreated, reached
as creationism gasped
seeing that which it became
shrugging off perfection's yoke
seeing self becoming flesh
and chuckled, calling self a joke,
watching man in evolute
struggling to grasp the beam
of elusive light in wink:
"Heh," said God in witness of
god's self--infinitesmal.

Legend speaks of legends made
stating that creation cried
as the tide retreated, beached--
wroth, creationism sighed
seeing shell it left behind
sloughing skin as grains of sand
seeing self as withering
exhaling in the effort lost
watching man's futility
blackening within the light:
"Heh," said God in witness of
creation of God's own demise.

Laughter, or a sigh--UNKNOWN.
All I know is that God SPOKE.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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1 posted 2003-07-19 12:10 PM

serenity...I'm taking this for me too...it answered some questions for me that I didn't know I needed to ask.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-07-19 12:18 PM

Karen...I've read this at least a dozen times already,
and no doubt I'll read it many more times in the future.
I absolutely love it!
Thank you for this...you're just TOO COOL!

Love you to pieces, lady.

And, Martie...there's no one I'd rather share this with.

it is better to be a part of beauty
for one instant and then cease to
exist than to exist forever
and never be a part of beauty
-- Don Marquis

garysgirl