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Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-07-18 08:55 PM




Wedding Vows

I give to you-
A single rose sealed with
love and a tender kiss.
With these loving words
I take this vow.
I vow to love you
until the end of eternity-
Even in death I will surround you
in my loving embrace.
I vow to protect you
from pain and sorrow-
My body a shield protecting you
in all that you do.
I vow to honor you-
My words flowing over you l
ike warm golden honey,
giving you warmth and serenity.
I vow to give you strength
when you are weak-
My hands you will hold
when life is a tribulation
and is filled with
life’s anguished heartbreak.
A single rose I give to you.
You are my love.
You are my light
in the storm of life.
With these vows
we entwine our lives as one.
You are my destiny.
Look into my eyes and hold my hands.
Together we will say,
“With these rings I do thee wed.”

Bonnie J.

© Copyright 2003 Bonnie j - All Rights Reserved
x8x_bigmike
Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130
California, USA
1 posted 2003-07-18 09:15 PM


this is great...are these your actual vows or what you would want to be...

Mike

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2003-07-18 09:23 PM


Bonnie j - vows to last a lifetime, nice write...

BC

Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
3 posted 2003-07-18 09:44 PM


Hi BigMike
When I did Wedding Vows I just made it up as I went a long. Sometimes the words just flow and I write them down. I did make up copied for a few people who wanted to use the vows at the renewel of their wedding vows.
I used glossy paper print in blue with blue flowers trailing down the side with a bible and a cross. It turned out pretty.

Bill glad you liked.

Bon-Bon


QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
4 posted 2003-07-19 03:18 PM


very nicely thought and written,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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