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Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-07-18 07:49 PM

Kiss me
she says
three shots
beyond drunk.

Hold me
want me
till morning
brings senses back

Don't tell me
your name darling
crazed sex
not hallmark love

Whisper
sweet lies
my husband never did
till he drives up

funny finding us
lying drenched in sticky lust
final revenge
for leaving me alone

j0n4th4n
Member

since 2003-03-11

Posts 94

1 posted 2003-07-18 08:08 PM

some of the word usage in here is excellent:
sticky lust, three shots beyond drunk

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

2 posted 2003-07-18 08:31 PM

iiiits a keeper!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2003-07-18 09:16 PM

surprise ending! keeping this one, Brad.

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

4 posted 2003-07-18 09:27 PM

its sad that i recognize that feeling with someone i was deeply in love with...great read.

Mike

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-07-19 04:02 AM

Uh Wow...yeah that covers it..wow

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-07-19 04:09 AM

You've covered it beginning, middle, and end.Very well done.
angelblueyes

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-07-20 04:31 AM

I would love to be your psychiatrist . . .
(lol - not that you need one just
to take a peek inisde your mind)
How do you do this?
Jesus . . .
amazing
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-20-2003 04:31 AM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2003-07-20 04:33 AM

At three shots beyond drunk, I would also be three stages beyond lust so I'm glad you wrote this - just to remind me how it could be.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-07-20 11:03 AM

bump where have you been hiding anyway. had to rered this. Crafty write that gets you looking one way and sucker punches you in the end

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

10 posted 2003-07-20 02:09 PM

the man drinks
the first drink
the drink drinks
the second drink
the third drink
drinks
the man...

be that
as it am
that am
de major good
potree
mistor brad

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia