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P.R.C Junior Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 40Hull, England |
Maybe when my hair gets darker when my eyes change colour Maybe when I'm a little taller when I'm thinner Maybe when I become normal when the world is peaceful Maybe when no one dies when there is no hate Maybe when the earth becomes flat when the sun doesnt shine anymore Maybe when the day no longer turns into night when the rain doesnt fall Maybe when nothing is the same when there is no one else Maybe then I will be good enough Maybe, just maybe, you will want me then |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There is so poignant and tender...beautiful. Eric |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
It will pass...and when you can express the pain like you have...you will know it when it comes again...while i dont think that would make me feel better..and it didnt about 2 months ago for me...in the end as the seasons pass, you will find this world of opportunity _____________________________ my email is bigmike@peakpool.com , feel free to write [This message has been edited by x8x_bigmike (07-18-2003 05:25 PM).] |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I like it! |
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