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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-07-18 04:48 PM



"Let me catch you"
You say.

So I let go.

And you
Do.



© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-07-18 04:49 PM



Ah yes...short and sweet, yet says much.  I like this.


"So here I am with pockets full of good intentions
But none of them will comfort me tonight..."  ~Carpenters

Martie
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2 posted 2003-07-18 05:03 PM


Ericc....Trust is the most important part of many things.
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-07-18 05:06 PM


A safety-net divine!

Warm hugs,
EA

P.R.C
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4 posted 2003-07-18 05:19 PM


short and sweet, so lovely
Patricia
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5 posted 2003-07-18 05:52 PM


Very cool, Eric.  Trust is a key element in any relationship.  You say so much with few words, my friend.

(Smiling at you!)

Patricia

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6 posted 2003-07-18 07:32 PM


Oh yes, Eric....it's so good to know that
your Love will be there to catch you.
Hugs  
Ethel

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2003-07-18 07:34 PM


A good feeling...set so clearly upon this page. Bravo. TD
Bill Charles
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8 posted 2003-07-18 09:21 PM


Ericc - much said in so few words, nice...

BC

AnamCara
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9 posted 2003-07-18 10:05 PM


...falling
deeper and deeper

into

the

arms of love.

Love,
Angela


[This message has been edited by AnamCara (07-18-2003 10:11 PM).]

passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-07-19 01:37 AM


very cool
angelblueyes
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11 posted 2003-07-19 03:22 AM


Without trust there is nothing. You've shown that well here.Nicely done.
angelblueyes

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12 posted 2003-07-19 10:24 AM


you've said so much in so few words. great writing!
Margherita
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13 posted 2003-07-19 07:25 PM


Collapsing into each other .... the miracle of love.
Beautiful!
Loving you, Margherita

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14 posted 2003-07-19 07:29 PM


Trust is the keyword in any relationship..
Well said Eric..as always.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

ThisDiamond
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15 posted 2003-07-19 10:39 PM


I came back for another read...
This struck me, like a soft breeze.  Trusting someone so much is a gift in itself.
TD

littlewing
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16 posted 2003-07-20 04:48 AM


Lovely Eric . . .
I loved this
Glad she caught you
xxoo

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