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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-07-18 01:06 PM



Curves In The Road
~*Marge Tindal*~

Life's roads have so often curved
when I wanted to go straight ahead
Somehow I got to where I am today
with all the scenery still in my head~

Leaving footprints for you to follow
through my poetic rhyme
With a tender smile upon this face
for the friendships I did find~

I would draw you a map,
but your curves will come at different places
Don't get lost my friend ...
I'll be waiting for you at the end of life’s road~



~*~ ~*~ ~*~
*For special people ... Yes, you*
~And you, and you and you~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-07-18 01:29 PM


Marge,
It's a date.

Martie
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2 posted 2003-07-18 02:17 PM


Marge/sis...I sure do know about those curves, some of them of the airpin variety.  
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3 posted 2003-07-18 02:25 PM



Yep...twists and turns and ups and downs...
yet we still end up just where we're supposed to be.

Love and hugs,
~Me


it is better to be a part of beauty
for one instant and then cease to
exist than to exist forever
and never be a part of beauty
-- Don Marquis

Patricia
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4 posted 2003-07-18 03:51 PM


I would draw you a map,
but your curves will come at different places
Don't get lost my friend ...
I'll be waiting for you at the end of life’s road~

Marge...this is incredible.  I don't want to get lost again...I am now finding my way down the road I have been driving in the dark...though I am starting to see day just ahead.  

So, with His help I will meet you there.

Patricia

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5 posted 2003-07-18 04:41 PM


Wise and beautiful words....thanks.
Eric

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6 posted 2003-07-19 06:00 AM


You left a soft smile on my lips with this one; I liked the way it flows..

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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7 posted 2003-07-19 09:18 AM


I would draw you a map,
but your curves will come at different places
Don't get lost my friend ...
I'll be waiting for you at the end of life’s road~


Marge this is a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Hugs  
Ethel


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8 posted 2003-07-19 09:21 AM


And so this is life...James
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9 posted 2003-07-19 03:11 PM


Dear Marge:  No matter how many curves in your life, you are enriched with friends wherever you go!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2003-07-19 04:54 PM


very touching Marge, very touching indeed
Bill Charles
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11 posted 2003-07-19 05:00 PM


Marge - some of those curves in the road lead to wonderous places at times...

BC

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2003-07-26 07:12 PM


I so appreciate the kind remarks on this one.
If some little something I pen ... reaches out beyond the borders of this place and touches another ... then I have done what I have been sent to do~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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