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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2003-07-18 10:07 AM


Shadowed truth, brightened
Brought to life, an explosion
Tender kiss, pressed universal
Thoughts in mind unyet spoken.

Eyes linked, absorbed abstruse minds
No needed lies, truth inescapable
Souls fused indisputable.

Words spoken, touched lips denied
Articulate in mind, examined telepathically
Lover assailing thoughts granted passage.


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Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
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1 posted 2003-07-18 12:10 PM


Thoughts in mind unyet spoken.

~*~

Enjoyed the wordplay.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-07-18 03:58 PM


"Truth can't lie" but it can be misconstrued and misunderstood.

Words spoken can often be misinterpreted, however, thoughts transmitted telepathically between lovers, seldom are.

I enjoyed your thoughts!

Warm hugs,
EA

x8x_bigmike
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since 2003-07-08
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3 posted 2003-07-18 04:42 PM


Words spoken, touched lips denied
Articulate in mind, examined telepathically
Lover assailing thoughts granted passage.
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a captured moment...without being captured...leaving the definition floating around my head...great writing...

Mike

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