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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-07-18 07:20 AM


Elements

The wind has blown me the sky and
I fly through the wink of an eye
And gravity is null and void
Humorous for a humanoid

But thinking has no weight at all
It comes within an echoes call
And makes itself the filament
That lights the phantoms element.

And here the fantasy is born
And so the texture of the lawn
It’s here I stay the prince of night
And play the knight to bring the light

Many a maiden I have saved
A Don Quixote of the brave
I never turn a windmill down
Nor would I act or play a clown

So give to me your favors lend
And I will ride until the end.



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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-07-18 07:25 AM


So give to me your favors lend
And I will ride until the end.

and yes the imagination is the greatest ride of all
good friday morning

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2003-07-18 07:35 AM


But thinking has no weight at all
It comes within an echoes call
And makes itself the filament
That lights the phantoms element.

And here the fantasy is born
And so the texture of the lawn
It’s here I stay the prince of night
And play the knight to bring the light

Many a maiden I have saved
A Don Quixote of the brave
I never turn a windmill down
Nor would I act or play a clown


=================================

And you've saved a moth or two


But thinking has no weight at all
It comes within an echoes call
And makes itself the filament
That lights the phantoms element.


And you couldnt be any cooler if you tried *L*

*ww*

x8x_bigmike
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3 posted 2003-07-18 07:40 AM


a good poem definately to start the morning...


Mike

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-07-18 07:43 AM


inkedgoddess
Thank you and the top of the morning to you my dear.

JM,
Good morning my Tinkerbell love. Once again you have buttered my toast with honey and sweetened my tea and captured my dragon Randy. WWRS
  

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-07-18 07:45 AM


Mike,
THe top of the morning to ya and thank you.

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6 posted 2003-07-18 08:45 AM


But thinking has no weight at all
It comes within an echoes call
And makes itself the filament
That lights the phantoms element.

~*~

Yes...this is what thinking is...
and a favorite poet finally put it into
words...just for me!  LOL...I know it's not
for me...
but I can think it is!

scorpio
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7 posted 2003-07-18 08:50 AM


Sy, you bring the light each morning to us..

believe in what your heart feels...

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8 posted 2003-07-18 09:04 AM


Ah!  Sy's here..the sun is shining..
God is in Heaven..and all is right with the world.
Thank you for brightening each and every morning for us Sy!
~Morning Hugs & Tea, Nancy~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-07-18 09:20 AM


Sunshine
Thinking has no weight so it can be just for you. LOL

scorpio
May the light always remain with you.

Nancy,
Morning Hugs & Tea what could be better.

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10 posted 2003-07-18 09:33 AM


And here the fantasy is born
And so the texture of the lawn
It’s here I stay the prince of night
And play the knight to bring the light


Goodmorning Seymour  
Have fun today "playing the knight".  
I enjoyed reading as always.
Hugs to you  
Ethel


Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-07-18 09:35 AM


Ethel,
And as always you are a love.

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12 posted 2003-07-18 09:50 AM


"I think...therefor I am" I have probably not spelled this correctly and I can't for the life of me remember whose quote this is...but it came directly to mind as I read your morning offering. Yet another poem to ponder - thankyou Seymour. Cherry tarts with tea? hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2003-07-18 10:07 AM


Chris,
Cherry tarts, my favorite.   

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14 posted 2003-07-18 03:54 PM


Good afternoon, dear Knight of Light!

Your pen is a mighty sword and your breath is the wind that blows life into your readers...


EA

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2003-07-18 05:23 PM


Earth Angel
And you are my Angel of the north.

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