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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-07-18 02:48 AM



My knight, my love, I weep,
for deep is pain, for my heart cries,
be not afraid, do not sleep,
Tears I cry, down cheeks, through hearts eyes,

Today my sweet, I may loose thee,
This battle, this brutal test,
Proving thy love only for me,
Upon thy stallion of this quest,

My heart, if thee die before my face,
Know my love tis forever true,
I give unto you, my silver heart necklace,
Place it around thy neck,my devoted love I prove,

In pain, in sorrow, my heart you possess,
Be forever strong, free and brave,
Ride with my loves fire, my souls caress,
For you are free in my love, not a slave,

Kiss thy heart for the luck of goodness,
Ride upon the wind of eagles wings,
Stand firm, valiant,don't give in to weakness,
If ever I lost thee,your my life, my everything,

My love, know my love deeply,
know this love truely,
when the moment the battle begins or starts,
My soul forever branded inside your heart,

Be thy brave knight, be the strong man you are,
Honoured I am, to have your love for me,
Just one last kiss, as I wish upon our star,
Win this, loves test, for you a jousting victory.


True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-18-2003 02:58 AM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-18 03:01 AM


*shaking head in awe*
JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12
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2 posted 2003-07-18 03:10 AM


You always write something so heartfelt.
Please..keep wooing us.
Check out my post "Jo".
I'm trying to create a new style.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-07-18 03:14 AM


Thank you Dixie I am blushing!

Jai..I replied as you were repling to mine...I like your new style it was great!
Thanks for the reply~

~ARH

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-07-18 05:17 AM


Nice writiing Romantic Heart...James
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2003-07-18 05:19 AM


Thank you James for repling!

~ARH

QjQ
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6 posted 2003-07-18 06:23 AM


beautiful write,,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2003-07-18 06:26 AM


Why thank you very much QjQ!

Your reply was very appreciated!

~ARH

x8x_bigmike
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8 posted 2003-07-18 06:44 AM


Very well written, ... fluid

Mike

Goldenrose
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9 posted 2003-07-18 09:23 AM


Burning flames of dragons and a thousand sword cuts i would endure for you my love...this truly stunning and awsome my love fantastic writing your best yet!!!!!!!!!...thank you my dear love.

Love ever Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
10 posted 2003-07-19 11:33 PM


Gold my love, I know you would protect and endure all of that and more, glad it made you happy!

xxxxxxxlove~ARH

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-19-2003 11:34 PM).]

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