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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-07-18 02:45 AM



the desire that is
what i see in your
eyes. the fire
the fire is what
makes you keep
telling lies.

the feeling you
have when you want
your own way. the descions
the descions you have to make

learning not learning nothing
of what you have once done. nothing
nothing is what your going to achieve

if your not honest or loving and
dearing. unselfishness is what you
need  willing the will
to make others feel worth
more not less.

coldness is what you need to be
rid of. break your heart out
show the love. greed is what is
controling you. money means nothing
without a love to show it to.

lonliness is what your going to feel
if you don't stop all the show off.
and for once be real. risks, is what
you may have to take.

and maybe your heart may even break.
not knowing of what would be would be
worst. that my freind is far more devestating
then a curse.

take my advise as you wish
just remeber this when you
give yourself away. Be careful
with yourself don't turn away.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-18 02:49 AM


very good piece of advice...great write
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2003-07-18 02:52 AM


thank you very much

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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