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True Blueprint of Love
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True Blueprint of Love |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Be thine through fate, loves charted course of plan, Layed out to create, Love between woman and man, Tis our love, it has painted, This blueprint to follow, Each piece priceless, untainted, Matched together, deep, not shallow, Perfect love, perfect heart, precission A souls mirror, a souls reflection, Hearts surgery, loves incision, Step by step, each a sewn connection, So shall it be, written within the stars, Someone planned it, long before we met, This love destiny, Poetrys memoirs, As each day unfolds, our souls a silhouette, Be thy love, be thy hearts eyes to see, Soulmate, upon our loves course, Forever our hearts flying free, Loves unchanging force, My love, follow the path till the end, Let our love guide the way, Into our hearts everyday, love must attend, Our love, our script, lifes play, Someone has guided us this far, Brought us together, our future they see, Our love, is a painting by Renoir, Our love full bloom, garden of potpourri, Unique by loves design, we are created, Just as our irises, our fingerprint, Our love, unique, patented, We have created loves true blueprint. [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-18-2003 02:35 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my! Millette! This is so wonderful! love the rhyme scheme, which I know is very difficult, but you have mastered it! I am thoroughly impressed lady-friend! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks dixie! really appreciate your reading and repling!  |
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SongVixen Junior Member
since 2003-07-06
Posts 43England |
I like your work, definitly romantic. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you song vixen, for your time to read and reply! ~ARH |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
i liked the last stanza...good enough to make a crit...maybe..you seem to have great imagery, and you set up an awesome idea, then after you have set it up and described it, here you seem to name it...it might work to leave it to chance...i dont know it works this way as well...good writing Mike |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Heart..:-) Each stanza could stand as a poem on its own, but together they make a beautiful medley...ice |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Pride and passion is what i feel my love.... pride in the excellant poetry you have created... and psssion for you that is the result of reading this poem.... thank you my love. Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrificly written and a great read,,, A voice of honesty |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
An awesome write that brings many thoughts and images to mind.You are very talented. angelblueyes |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Unique by loves design, we are created, Just as our irises, our fingerprint, Our love, unique, patented, We have created loves true blueprint. This is so beautiful...and so true for true loves.  Hugs  Ethel |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Gold my heart, you are my passion, imagination, creation Without you my heart would be empty! xxx love ~ARH QjQ~thank you for your compliment! Angelblueeyes~thanks and welcome to passions! Ethel~ Thank You, if love is in our hearts than it is what we must write about! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-19-2003 11:21 PM).] |
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