The whispers of the gentle wind

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x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

0 posted 2003-07-17 11:09 PM

after days spent
escaping, lifes
chill sweat
in spinklers
routing
wrinkles
of lint
and grime

the day breaks
and i retire
to recline
as the stars
wink into view
one by one
illiminating the
sky

how i wish
the wind
would stop its
gentle breeze
filling my ears
resonating
memories
as clouds
lit in a days
last light
re-enact
memories
long past

in these inspired
moments under
massive clouds,
Faith
Father
and Fate
lay suddenly tangible
giving solace
and comfort
spurring my will
to believe the whispers
of the wind

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-07-18 12:12 PM

in these inspired
moments under
massive clouds,

Hmmmm, where anything is possible!!
Nice write Mike~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-07-18 02:47 AM

as only wind can do

good write

SongVixen
Junior Member

since 2003-07-06

Posts 43
England

3 posted 2003-07-18 06:11 AM

Very enticing, love the wind poetry.

Great Poem!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2003-07-18 06:17 AM

You poem is like wind song, I can hear it singing to me.

Thanks~ARH

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-07-18 07:20 AM

let the wind sing her name
if only in echoes
may her love still remain

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-07-18 11:48 AM

Mike~
Welcome to Passions~

'in these inspired
moments under
massive clouds,
Faith
Father
and Fate
lay suddenly tangible
giving solace
and comfort
spurring my will
to believe the whispers
of the wind'

I felt it very tangible through your word-thougts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-07-18 12:08 PM

bigmike

"Faith
Father
and Fate
lay suddenly tangible
giving solace
and comfort"

Thought-filled writing...I enjoyed

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-07-18 08:13 PM

in these inspired
moments under
massive clouds,
Faith
Father
and Fate
lay suddenly tangible
giving solace
and comfort
spurring my will
to believe the whispers
of the wind

Mike, this is absolutely beautiful. I'm
really going to enjoy reading your poetry.

"If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room
in my mind & slam the door on it." Gary~ Heart hugs, Ethel

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