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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-07-17 11:05 PM



Betrayal despection
yes i belive that is
your true proffession

spinning lies and tangles
when will your web truly
unravel

playing night and day
different lives in every
way. seeing this as if you
don't care.

just making sure you have the upper
hand. so it can make you feel like
more of the man.

who cares who you truly hurt in
the end. selfish is okay,because
its your only way

you dont even think about
who you really hurt,not
even twice.

someday it will be you on the
other side,someday it will be
you that cries  but
when its your turn it never
will truly go away.

happiness you will never
find,maybe it will when you
stop spinning lies.

I will be there in the end
with the upper hand. there
you will be still thinking
you have won.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-07-18 02:17 AM


spinning lies and tangles
when will your web truly
unravel

very nice lines in the write,,,
enjoyed reading...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2003-07-18 02:20 AM


thank you so much im glad you enjoyed it.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-07-18 02:27 AM


I know what you mean...
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-07-19 04:42 PM


Julie . . .
and here you define Karma for us
excellent
xxoo

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