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Silent Dream |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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Silent Dream My life-long friend got married today I stood up for his bride Such deep devotion they two share I could not help but cry Their vows were spoken from the heart No script or prompting needed I wonder if he knows Each word she said my heart repeated She truly loves him from her soul She'll cherish him I know But can he see deep in my heart My love for him still grows My life-long dream was silenced today In their romantic bliss And as I looked into his eyes His bride stole my last kiss -vlraynes Reposted by Request "So here I am with pockets full of good intentions But none of them will comfort me tonight..." ~Carpenters [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-18-2003 05:25 AM).] |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
vlraynes, this has left me speechless. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...how sad..excellent write.. Heart Hugs, Nancy. ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Aw I remember this one   |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
 The only thing I can think of to say undermines the entire thing very badly, so I'll just keep my mouth shut. It was good.... just not particularly pleasant....It's ok. I still love you!  Kielo I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me.... |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
It was sad and twisted. Though, happy and loveable. Your pain was felt. Two thumbs up! Check out my post "jo" I tried a new style. Jai |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely expressed,,,, A voice of honesty |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
Ive been there...not in your shoes but in the pue, watching it happen but in a not so nice way...there is honor in realizing someone elses love for the person in your heart is real as much as your own is...i too was left speechless... Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Oh my little rhymer gal ... you KNOW I love it~  Love you bestest of all~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well that's no fair, and kind of hard to watch. I suppose it adds closure if nothing else. Peace good poetess~ |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
I'm so glad that you listen to voices on the wind Vicky... a marvelous write... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky...It takes courage to be the friend of your friend under these circumstances. I commend your heart! |
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