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....I Am.... ( thirty or less)
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....I Am.... ( thirty or less) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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~~~ My heart soars My spirit takes flight My lips whistle a turtle dove song And though I do not bear wings - I am the feather in your cap. . . . Chris Barker July 2003 ~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I am the feather in your cap." You sure are!! I know this to be fact!!  Adorable write Chris! Yanno I love it! ~Hugs, luv and miss ya, Teed~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
What a creative piece of writing...I enjoyed this very much, Chris.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Nancylee and scorpio for taking time to read and comment. Hugs! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Chris - you are the feather in the cap... You are special... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Chris, this is beautiful, sweet friend, sorry I've missed a few of your gorgeous poems but I'll catch up when I get back, yay!  You truly have wings deep in your heart...angel wings...God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Chrissypooh Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 80Canada |
This is so wonderful!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh wow! At first, my thoughts of the title were... of course she's less than 30! She's only 29!!! Then I opened the gift of your poetry... and I saw Annabelle winking at me... for this... This... is Poetry! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful poem, Chris! I really like it. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Such nice comments !! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"And though I do not bear wings - I am the feather in your cap." YES! I love this, Chris! YOU are a poet!  "So here I am with pockets full of good intentions |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Perfect. Jason |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You'd be the feather in any man's cap!  Warm hugs, Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Vicky, Jason & Linda, Thankyou so very much. "At one glance |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Chris!!! This is perfect!! I like the easy feeling that is so full and light hearted, and the simple truth in knowing!!! The firmest friendships are formed with mutual adversity, like steal unites with the fiercest flame. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
short and sweet! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Bluesy and Dixie!! hugs!!  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Chris, I knew I read this, but forgot to respond. forgive me my friend. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is beautiful and shows the beauty within your soul. angelblueyes |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awww thankyou Wind !! angelblueyes - thankyou for reading and commenting. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Yes my dear, you truly are! This was magnificent. TD |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Many thanks TD - hugs! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Came to find you. Bump. TD |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, this is beautiful. I'm sorry that I missed it the first time around. I really do try to read all your poems. I love your poetry. It's so beautiful and sweet.  Hugs Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh now, Chris you know I will argue the wing comment up there . . . but yes, indeed a feather you be *smiling* xxoo |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is just so beautiful. Patricia |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
What a surprise this morning! More comments on my little piece of thought. Thankyou all so much. hugs !! |
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