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Open Poetry #27

Am I The Storm?

Carolina
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 224
Myrtle Beach, SC

0 posted 2003-07-17 01:53 PM

When you hear
the thunder of my heart,
see the lightning
of my passion -
Do I become the storm
that causes you
to roll up your window
and seek shelter?

[This message has been edited by Carolina (07-17-2003 02:26 PM).]

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

1 posted 2003-07-17 07:23 PM

Tempestuous loves are never boring...and this poem speaks with emotion and passion..

believe in what your heart feels...

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

2 posted 2003-07-18 12:35 PM

nice write

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

3 posted 2003-07-18 01:14 AM

OMG This was absolutely wonderful Carolina!

I loved this!

Going to the Library!

Some women wait for something to change and nothing does, so they change themselves.
-Audre Lorde

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-07-18 01:27 AM

Carolina...very nice poetic inquiry.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"it is better to be a part of beauty
for one instant and then cease to
exist than to exist forever
and never be a part of beauty"
-- Don Marquis

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-07-18 02:30 AM

nice...I wonder the same thing sometimes about me

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