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Color Tour |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Color Tour I was just a season’s turn a yellowed leaf changed in yearn sweet green summer days gone by fall is a destiny I can not deny "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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Deus Junior Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 18California, US |
Very nice, the flow is great. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sighs.. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
*tears up* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awww~~sighing~~ and your signature...I know that feeling Helen hugsss M |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful metaphor...very well done.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
such melancholy |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
oh..this is just perfect |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I cannot perceive you ever being a yellowed leaf to anyone . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (07-19-2003 05:50 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Melancholic. Well expressed fears. But keep summer in your heart .... fall has yet to come. Love, Margherita |
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