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Osmotic Glass
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Osmotic Glass Watching through The windowpane I watched The light Ignite the rain And somehow Moisture leaked The glass And rolled across My cheek in pass |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I watched The light Ignite the rain And somehow Moisture leaked The glass And rolled across My cheek in pass ========================== Well then darlin Sy...that makes you the osmotic poet..cause your words pass thru this blue glass and touch me every day.     "I'm good at two things and this is the other one." |
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Deus Junior Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 18California, US |
The light Ignite the rain That is spectacular. Ignite is a great word. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well good morning sir...another lovely poem written by a heart of understanding, faith, warmth and joy for others. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And you touch me and it's not even raining. WWRS Deus Good pick, thank you. LeeJ Just read your write and we say the same thing. Thank you |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour, a piece of perfection yet again this sunny morn. Straight into my library as well as my heart, it goes. Has Enchantress served up the tea? Toast with orange marmalade is ready! hugs, Chris  "There shall be eternal summer in the grateful heart." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! I'm standing right here behind Nightshade with the tea... Look! Can you see me..smiling at you?!  I do hope those aren't tears on your handsome cheeks.. This is extremely well written and I much enjoyed the read. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
'Morning Seymour. Thanks for this good start to my day. Aren't our two little Canadian sisters sweet, serving you tea and toast? Have a good day, my friend. Hugs  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, You are so sweet I don't think I need the jelly this morning. Nancy' Thank you dear be right there for tea. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel Yes they are sweet and so are you. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Doggone it Sy! This might be a perfect poem. Truly amazing! You should be very proud of this little beauty Ed |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Sy...the images of a man standing with rain running down an opaque face is heartwrenching. Bless you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx If you say so then I am, thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T.?---Is that really you?  Nothing like a little surprise now and then! --and this was a very pleasant one! Seymour seen thru' window pane, 'Tis vision fresh as summer rain... This poem really speaks to me and I deem it a  !!! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Soleil Noir Thank you for understanding. Earth Angel An Angels keeper, you make me very proud. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Every morning at my house we sit and wait to read the new wonder from you. Sir, you never fail to reach out and touch our heart. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
DAMN! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inot2B A very nice reply, thank you. Passing, Thank you for the Damn. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Sy I just love this! This is a keeper! And I wholeheartedly echo what JM Said (don't ya notice that all of us echo what she said - that girl is way cool and says the most perfect things, huh?) Take care, Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You touch my eye with liquid sigh. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this was one of yourshortest,I think..but excellent Sy M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, If you like it I am pleased, for you have a talent for writing. Martie Liquid sigh, my my. Maureen, I'll take the excellent LOL |
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