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JaiOfHeaven
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0 posted 2003-07-17 05:52 AM



Lovely emotions drop to the pit of my stomach;
the abyss that overflows with tragic feelings.
Implosions of pain explode and rise into my chest.
Why does it hurt so good?
The lovely emotion,
uncultivated and without her harvest,
only eats away at the illusion of myself like acid.

succulent divine fruit would touch her lips,
flavor eternal,
when she chooses to make me ripe for her.
She's become like an eagle.
She hovers in a circle around me wondering of the flavor that would embrace her.
while I wait to fly away.

© Copyright 2003 Byron Keith Landry Jr. - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-07-18 12:27 PM


Why does it hurt so good?
The lovely emotion,
uncultivated and without her harvest,

Isn't life strange, considering those feelings that hurt so good!

I liked what you said about the eagle circling~~  That explains alot!

Enjoyed reading this Jai~

The firmest friendships are formed with mutual adversity, like steal unites with the fiercest flame. (author unknown to me)

JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 207
California, Usa
2 posted 2003-07-18 04:07 PM


Thanks.
I appreciate the read.
I've been checking you out.
I enjoy reading your works as well.

Jai

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