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Local Rebel
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0 posted 2003-07-17 01:34 AM


I remember when old Toe
Used to beat up Balladeer
You'd thought it was Mike Tyson
A-bitin off his ear

He used to pick on Long John too
And not the least of which me
Yep I miss that coot from bama
And his one and only's three

I might as well just stay in bed
And order up room service
One thing's good without him though
The sheep don't look so nervous

Of his elucidated prose and rhyme
Lil suthern always brag'd
But you could count on me, LJ, and deer
To give ol Toe a Rag....



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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-07-17 01:58 AM


Hey Reb Hawke, I like this.
It's good rhyme, too. I like that.  

"If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room
in my mind & slam the door on it." Gary~  Heart hugs, Ethel

timothysangel1973
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2 posted 2003-07-17 02:33 AM


Great write Reb!

You gotta love those guys!!!

It's like a soap opera, I'm always so excited when I see a post from either of them.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-07-17 03:17 AM


hehehehehe
Carolina
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4 posted 2003-07-17 09:15 AM


lol some things NEVER change!  
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-07-17 10:24 AM


...it's always fun to read the banter between you guys

M

Soleil Noir
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6 posted 2003-07-17 10:25 AM


Good to see you
back in the swing of things,
Reb.

suthern
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7 posted 2003-07-17 10:45 AM


I count on you all to give smiles and laughter... and you do... and you do. *S*

Big hugs from an original O&O! LOL

Auntie

jellybeans
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8 posted 2003-07-17 02:57 PM


lol, can almost see the feathers that will fly when this hits the fan......
rofg...thanks for the smiles

Balladeer
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9 posted 2003-07-17 11:12 PM


You remember when ole Toe
Used to beat up Balladeer?
Forgive me, Rebel, if I say
Your memory's gone queer!!

He never laid a glove on me
As far as I could tell
I knocked him out so bad
He couldn't even hear the bell.

He disappears too much these days
Too busy lickin' wounds.
Instead of chasin' deer he looks
For Alabama coons.

He just don't get around as much
As he did way back then
Cause he knows if he shows his face
We'll whomp his butt again!!!

Enchantress
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10 posted 2003-07-17 11:15 PM


LOL..love this and 'Deer's reply.
Much enjoyed the read.
~Hugs~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

Toerag
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11 posted 2003-07-18 07:44 AM


Yea...Balladeer's really a tough guy...LOL....But, we have a problem here with a Nighthawk devil...now known as Local Rebel....and now my feelings are really hurt.....But I'll survive, not get even, but get way ahead.....

and Bally...if you'd ever want to put on some gloves and have a little gentleman's duel of sparring..you just let me know..I can't write poetry....but my hands and feet are poetry in motion....I float like a butterfly and sting like a bee...my hands are so fast they would dazzle Ali....I'll break your fist with my face if you keep messin' with me boy!!!

[This message has been edited by Toerag (07-18-2003 07:45 AM).]

x8x_bigmike
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12 posted 2003-07-18 07:46 AM


One thing's good without him though
The sheep don't look so nervous
__________
of was crackin up on this one ... good ole' boy...

Mike

[This message has been edited by x8x_bigmike (07-18-2003 07:47 AM).]

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