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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-07-17 12:35 PM


in the pit
reznor's water
rains down
like a blessing

we share
a look that says
it doesn't get
any better than this

and it didn't
3 years later
what's become of you?
my friend no more

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-17-2003 12:35 AM).]

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wranx
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since 2002-06-07
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Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2003-07-17 12:37 PM


Some grow up, others move on...Who knows?

At least it seems to work like that

[This message has been edited by wranx (07-17-2003 12:38 AM).]

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-07-17 12:48 PM


yeah, I wonder too
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
3 posted 2003-07-17 12:26 PM


three years ago ohhh I am in a good and bad place if that makes any sense . . .

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-17-2003 03:31 PM).]

Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 688
USA
4 posted 2003-07-17 12:28 PM



I remember
promises

we'll always write
we'll always be best friends
we'll always be...

different.

Individuals, given room, opportunity, time...
grow and change.

I wouldn't want
not to be an individual
but it would be nice
to touch base with them
now and again.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-07-17 01:19 PM


What Soleil said..
and I too would like to know...
how, where...what if??
~Hugs~


~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~


[This message has been edited by Enchantress (07-17-2003 01:19 PM).]

Nightshade
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Member Patricius
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just out of reach
6 posted 2003-07-17 02:36 PM


Raph, quite possibly they are sitting there wondering the same thing. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
7 posted 2003-07-17 04:08 PM


thanks everybody..depending on the day i either miss this friend or think good riddance....as i said in another post i think i miss his dog the most..lol
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
8 posted 2003-07-17 05:23 PM


I totally saw this in my head.

Reznor and all.

Great write

SEA
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with you
9 posted 2003-07-17 06:41 PM


ahha, I am supposed to be making dinner...lol snuck in quick...I know how this feels...and there are days when I think fine, don't write me...see if I care...then of course, I do care...so I write him...
Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
10 posted 2003-07-17 08:16 PM


Thanks Kaoru what a concert, A perfect circle opening for NIN..i was heaven and when Reznor hit us my friend tells me I'm never bathing again and I said i didn't think you did in the first place

Aye Susan i know that too but this one ended pretty badly don't think there's any going back


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