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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2003-07-16 09:27 PM



Because...

Hello, my friend...I miss you.
Have you seen you anywhere?
Just wanted to drop in today...
remind you that I care.
I hope that life is kind to you
and greets you with a smile -
that happiness will come your way
for more than just awhile.
I pray you find contentment -
that your heartaches will be few -
and most of all I pray you know
you're loved...because you're YOU.

~vlraynes


For a friend...

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

© Copyright 2003 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2003-07-16 09:48 PM


Vicky...Very sweet you are, and a good friend.  I'm sure this will be special to the special person it's meant for.  
babygurl55
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2 posted 2003-07-16 10:05 PM


hello...this was very good. it shows how much you care. keep on writing, cause this one was really good!


QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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3 posted 2003-07-16 10:08 PM


very nice thoughts,,,

we got a sprinkel of rain at 6:30 with some lightning n  thunder..

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (07-16-2003 10:10 PM).]

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2003-07-16 11:09 PM


The beauty of this is the beauty of YOU.
Your friendship shines on so many, I think we can all take this as a prayer for our own.

You are a wonderful person and a cherished friend.

You made me smile AGAIN.



Love you lady.


JaiOfHeaven
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5 posted 2003-07-16 11:27 PM


You were used by God if you know it or not...My heart is mended from what I felt...earlier today..thanks!
Kielo
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6 posted 2003-07-17 12:02 PM


awwwwww..... (Maybe I AM still too tired for this.... lol....)

I like it very much.

Kielo

I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me....

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-07-17 12:56 PM


a lucky friend indeed
vlraynes
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8 posted 2003-07-17 02:22 AM



Martie...thank you...she is a good friend as well,
and deserves no less...nor do you.

babygurl55...glad you enjoyed this...thank you.

QjQ...I am SO jealous!  Send some of that my
way, will ya?...LOL.  I really MUST have rain!
Thanks so much for reading, my friend...glad you enjoyed.

Karen...have I mentioned how much I love ya?  Well I do!  
Your friendship is priceless...as are you...
And...if I've made you smile, then I'm smiling too.

JaiOfHeaven...that was the nicest thing you could
have said to me...THANK YOU!

Kielo...thank you...

Dixie...thank you...and it is I who is the 'lucky' one.

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-17-2003 02:23 AM).]

brian sites
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9 posted 2003-07-17 03:38 AM


smile.......
just a smile

you weave blankets of warmth

vlraynes
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10 posted 2003-07-17 03:45 AM



Brian...smiling back at you...

Thank you, my friend.

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-07-17 03:51 AM


Vicky, this is so sweet. You really are a good friend, and I know whoever this is for really appreciates it.
Hugs  
Ethel


(Hey, I love this line.....LOL)

Have you seen you anywhere?

timothysangel1973
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12 posted 2003-07-17 05:26 AM


Were so lucky to have you!


Skyfire
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13 posted 2003-07-18 01:10 AM


*sigh* BIG

awww

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2003-07-18 10:28 AM



Me here~

Let's just make it a Vicky-Morning~


*Huglets*
~*Me*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
15 posted 2003-07-18 10:36 AM


a perfect poem to perk one up...thanks
hugss
M

Cassandra Ness
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16 posted 2003-07-19 08:15 PM


I like the compliment you gave me.  It is very sweet of you.  I like your poem too.
Margherita
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17 posted 2003-07-19 08:27 PM


A beautiful heartsong.
Love, Margherita

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
18 posted 2003-07-19 09:14 PM


Vicky, you are special! Did you know that?

Loving hugs,
Linda

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19 posted 2003-07-19 09:49 PM


Yes you are Vicky....very very special!!
~Hugs YOU!~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

angelblueyes
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20 posted 2003-07-19 10:40 PM


This is very sweet and  beautiful.Toi have a friend like you would be a wonderful treasure.
angellbueyes

Sunshine
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21 posted 2003-07-19 11:32 PM



I've lost myself
more than once or twice
in a lifetime or two...

if I had received a poem
like this, I would have known
I was loved, too...




Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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22 posted 2003-07-19 11:34 PM


a lovely write for a lovely friend - you show such heartfelt goodness in your writings - Brava Bella Roniece Dawson-Brce
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23 posted 2003-07-20 12:08 PM


if Hallmark actually used good poetry in thier cards they would steal from you...
vandana
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24 posted 2003-07-20 04:45 PM


enjoyed
dgvarner
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25 posted 2003-07-21 08:44 AM


sounds like a good birthday card greeting...   have you sent this one to blue mountain arts??

very nice write for a friend..

hugs, g

peppermint35
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26 posted 2003-07-21 09:19 AM


Very nice indeed; I'd certainly like such a card with such caring in every word

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Nightshade
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27 posted 2003-07-21 09:21 AM


Oh my ... this is lovely. Cherished friendship..isn't it grand?!! hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

littlewing
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28 posted 2003-07-21 11:50 AM


Beautiful Vicki . . .
I do believe we all have someone we
can send this too
xxoo

vlraynes
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29 posted 2003-07-22 10:22 PM



Wow...you all are SO good to me!  I just love you guys!

Ethel...thanks so much, my friend.  I'm really glad
you enjoyed this one...and?  I like that line too. *smile*

Tima...what a sweet thing go say.  Tis I who am so
lucky to have all of you.  Thank you! *smile*

Rhonda...go to your room!  LOL  What have I told you
about 'awww'ing at me? *grin*  Seriously though...
you KNOW I love ya. *smile*  Thanks for reading this one.

Marge...thanks so much, my friend.  Good to see your
name on this one.  Love you much, my friend. *smile*

Maureen...I'm happy that this perked you up. *smile*  
Thank you so much for reading.  Hugs back to you, friend.

Cassandra...sweetest girl...thank you SO MUCH for
replying to my poem.  You made me smile. *smile*

Margherita...thank you. *smile*

Linda...you are such a sweetheart.  Tis all of you
who are special and are so good to me.  I truly
appreciate you, my friend.  Thank you. *smile*

Nancy Lee...thank you so much, my friend.  I always
appreciate your kind words.  Hugs to you, friend. *smile*

angellbueyes...well, then...consider me a friend. *smile*
Thank you so much for the kind words.  I truly
do appreciate it.

Karilea...in that case..you just did. *smile*
I'm so happy that this one touched you.  Your
friendship means much to me, and I appreciate you.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce...thank you so much...and yes, she IS a lovely friend. *smile*

LR...you, sir, have made my day with such a lovely compliment. *smile*
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and
reply to my work.  I truly appreciate you. *smile*

Vandana...thank you. *smile*

Gale...thank you, old friend.  I'm so glad you enjoyed this one.
I may not say it enough, but your friendship means more
to me than I can put into words.  I love you bunches.
*hugs and smiles*

peppermint35...thank you so much.  I'm happy you enjoyed. *smile*

Chris...yes, it certainly is...and I am blessed to
have such amazing friends.  Thank you so much. *smile*

Sue...yes...I think so too.  I thank you, my friend. *smile*


And...and great big thank you to Karen, for being
such a beautiful friend to me and for being the
inspiration for this piece of my heart in verse.
Thank you, lady.  I love you bunches!


Love and hugs to all,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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