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Open Poetry #27

If You Love Me, Let me know

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-16 08:22 PM

Semi-automatic
weight in your hand.
As mine reach
for
the sky.

If you love me, let me know.

I look for an
opportune time,
but your feelings
are so
introverted.

I'm disenchanted,
for what I
thought has rung up
as untrue.

Right now I can't afford you.

If you love me, let me know.

For the sand has grown
softer,
with ease it slips
through the hourglass..
Figure
in which you grew accustomed, and now
in homicidal veiw..
You
hold a semi-automatic

weight in your hand.

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

1 posted 2003-07-16 08:26 PM

hm...my heart is aching contiousily..All of a sudden I miss her..

I keep reading things that bring back these
painful emotions
I want to cry, but can't!
anyway...your writing was awesome...
really digs deep.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-07-16 10:15 PM

very nice write,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-07-16 11:09 PM

Right now I can't afford you.

get out of my head it's dark in there

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